The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts demonstrate the average amount of energy consumption and the emission recorded in an Australian family.
Generally, most energy was spent on heating and water heating, and the quantities of emission exhausted from the two activities accounted almost a half of the total greenhouse gas.
In the first pie chart, it can be seen that heating took up 42% of energy. Ranking secondly in consuming energy, water heating accounted for one-half of the proportion of energy use. Sequentially, the percentage of energy used for refrigeration, lightning and cooling ranked lower than the formers figures, with 7%, 4% and 2% respectively. Additionally, the last figure in the chart, which consumed 15% of energy, is other appliances.
The second pie chart reflects the percentage of gas emitted from the energy used mentioned earlier, and unsurprisingly, water heating is the leading figure with 32% of emissions. Other appliances, which ranks lower the previous one, but still has a high amount of greenhouse gas, attributed to 28% of emissions. The lowest, which is the one emitted less gas, is cooling, contributes only 3%. The other figures, including heating and refrigeration, are to blame for 15% and 14% of greenhouse gas emissions respectively.
- The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000 84
- Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems? 73
- The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars? 56
- Nowadays, the traditions and customs relating to the food we eat and the way we eat are changing. Why is it happening? Do you think this kind of change is positive or negative? 67
- The line graph shows the size of the global population from 1400 to 2000, and the pie charts show the global population by region in 1900 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, secondly, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30845771144 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04897606471 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572139303483 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.854706804 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.7 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274001561732 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112105267937 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532146225913 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176718926043 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360780473336 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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