The first chart be;ow shows energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of energy consumption by Australian citizens in six various tools, while the second pie chart which is below the first shows the impact of energy use on the production of greenhouse gas.
It is obvious that heating has the majority of portion use among people and the lowest percent related to cooling tools. In the second graph, all groups for greenhouse gas emissions have increased except heating.
As can be seen, Australian households use heating energy more than other groups by 42%. Water heating by more than a quarter is located in the second place. Other appliances have less than twenty percent and the other three remaining groups are less than ten percent. Although heating has the highest percentage using energy, it reduces around 27 percent to emission greenhouse gas which is a very useful energy for the environment and people should use this more than others. Other appliances have increased by about 12% from 15 percent. Refrigeration by increasing 7% has approximately the same percentage as heating but this energy can emit double the gas when used and is dangerous. Water heating did not change a lot and the two last groups not only did not change a lot but also their percentage are under ten percent yet.
As a result, the society of Australia has a good tendency to use heating energy which produces less gas and it is a good point for the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, while, as a result, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86008230453 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58470942072 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510288065844 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0070486135 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.363636364 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261259963233 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102823520825 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979285321168 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177955687157 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959236376043 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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