The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Austrilian household. The second chart shows tje greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevent.
The pie charts illustrate percentage of energy consumption and result from it in greenhouse categorized into sixtypes in Austrilian houses.
Overall, heating proceses use more energy in houses while greenhouse also mainly emit heating gas from water. Lighting and cooling activities produce insignificant amount of gas as well as consumption is also low.
Household heating and water heating processes ' energy usage is 42% and 30% respectively, while green house gas emission through the water heating can produce 32%. In household 7% of energy is used for refrigeration while gas emission because of that is exactly twice.
Austrilian household use 2% energy of cooling while greenhouse can emit gas from cooling more than 1%. Gas emission because of lighting is doubled in greenhouse that of energy consumption in household.
It can be seen that, 28% Of gas provide by unknown applications in greenhouse while in household it is only 15%.
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- The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Austrilian household. The second chart shows tje greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariso 56
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38926174497 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93115763125 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51677852349 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0044638113 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.375 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286654903621 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150752224665 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735352811492 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174323505862 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692982759915 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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