The first graph below shows the weight in tonnes of fruit produced by a farm during each month in 2013 and also the amount in tonnes of fertiliser used The second graph shows the volume of rainfall in each month in millimetres

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The first graph below shows the weight (in tonnes) of fruit produced by a farm during each month in
2013, and also the amount (in tonnes) of fertiliser used. The second graph shows the volume of
rainfall in each month (in millimetres.)

The three graphs give information about the contrast of the weight of the fruit produced and the mass of fertilized used, as well as the volume of rainfall in 2013

The amount of fertilizer used and the rainfall millimetres follow a quite similar trend during the period. Started high from the beginning of 2013, the fertilizer and rain volume sharply decreased in the first 6 months. Both hit a minimum in July, with roughly 0 tonnes for the former and 4 millimetres for the latter. The trend then increased and hit peak again at the end of the year

In contrast to the two graphs, the amount of food produced started low and rose fast. The fruit's weight generally follows this pattern. In January, there were only about 2 tonnes of fruit produced, which was double in August. After reached a maximum of more than 4 tonnes, the number of fruits produced hit a sharp fall and come back to the begin of the year rate in December.

In short, the amount of fertilizer used is in sync with the amount of rainfall, but the production of fruit is in contrast with this trend

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