The flow chart shows how sweaters are manufactured in a garment factory in Bangladesh

Essay topics:

The flow chart shows how sweaters are manufactured in a garment factory in Bangladesh.

The schema chart illustrates about production of sweaters which is manufactured in garment industry of Bangladesh.
To begin with, it is clear by analysing process that, collection of yarn is beginning step of manufacture sweater. Secondly, it is taken under winding and distribution. After this, knitting is started for making panels of sweater. Fourth step includes inspection of knitting panels via online. In fifth step, such panels are gone for binding. Once more, panels become analyse via online which are linked in previous step. Furthermore, trimming is done and put forward for checking under light and then mended it. If any issue is detected in this step, hence item is sent back to second step of winding and distribution.
Moreover, prepared product is gone for making holes of buttons and in further step, sweater is washed. After cleaning, sweatshirts are labelled and thus ironing is done. In next step, product is investigated by quality team of factory. After inspection, product is ready for folding and packing. In second last step, final examination is done and lastly sweaters are prepared for shipment.
Overall, production of sweaters include plenty of steps with relevant method which starts from collection of yarn till shiping.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...step, sweater is washed. After cleaning, sweatshirts are labelled and thus ironin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, then, thus, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.295 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71012453588 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6652251831 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.6 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114246487843 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430630087663 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848484050376 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117521486832 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12793595017 0.0819641961636 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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