The picture reveals how a final draft is written. Overall, there are six stages involved in this process, beginning with the first private tutorial and ending with the finished product – the final draft.
It can be seen that there are two major steps in writing a draft completely. At the first stage of the initial process, researchers discuss the selected task and topic with their tutors, then form an array of obtained resources-books and several articles. This was followed by the combination of actions occurring in the library in which students read and take notes from literature. After that, surveys and questionnaires are given to the public, and interviews are also carried on. Finally, the first draft is completed by finding suitable essay content, written style, and language.
The process continued with the second private tutorial also called study group discussion. At the fourth step, the first draft is then ready for analysis to find out problems and then be proposed with further ideas. Subsequently, an input revision in which researchers re-read all resource materials, and before the second draft is completed, suggestions and quotations are checked. Finally, a chain of steps (including rewriting, spellchecking) and the two supplements of compiling a bibliography and adding a title page are conducted to submit the end product in advance.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transport in the UK between 1974 to 2002 by four different modes of transport 78
- The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed employed or further education in 1980 1990 and 2000 89
- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 61
- Some people could be naturally good leaders Others believe that people can learn leadership skills Discuss both views and give your opinion 80
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 217 200
No. of Characters: 1117 1000
No. of Different Words: 132 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.838 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.147 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.723 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.727 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.283 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.522 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.026 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4