The first map illustrate the map of Peyton Park now, while the second one is a propose about possible changes, which can be done at the park.
Firstly, in the centre of the Park, there is a lake. In addition, to the south of the park is a large parking lot, while to the East side a Tennis Court is present. Finally, people can take advantage of surrounded by three tables with and chairs, to the North.
The plan for proposed changes show a few of differences. Alongside the lake, a swimming dock was added to the east side of the lake, and moreover, an area with some games for children would built to the north region of the park, just between the picnic area and the lake. The Picnic area [would locate near the court, to the north zone of it, with the Tennis Court, in fact, would be to the West of the lake. While the parking lot was still remained to the South of the lake.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eyton Park now, while the second one is a propose about possible changes, which can be do...
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Line 6, column 191, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...area with some games for children would built to the north region of the park, just b...
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Line 6, column 289, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: ']' seems to be missing
...cnic area and the lake. The Picnic area [would locate near the court, to the nort...
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Line 6, column 410, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fact, would be to the West of the lake. While the parking lot was still remained to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, still, while, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27218934911 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08284023669 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526627218935 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0941227051 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 5.23603664747 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225881862877 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108451520374 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110073366236 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163607820267 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845415129891 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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