the following graph compares the rates of immigration to New Zealand from four countries between 2001 and 2005
The given bar chart illustrates changes in the immigration to New Zealand from four nations and reveals differences in their trends from 2001 to 2005.
Overall, South Africa had the smallest number of people moving to New Zealand which followed a downward trend while that of the UK experienced a reverse pattern and ups and downs were witnessed when it comes to the figures for China and India.
It is evident from the chart that emigration to New Zealand in China and India followed a similar trend. The number of both Chinese and Indian citizens leaving started at over 4000 people in 2001. After almost doubling two years after, the statistics for China fell dramatically to just about 5000 people in 2005. Similarly, approximately 7700 Indian residents moved to New Zealand in 2003 while the number plummeted significantly in 2005 to only around 3000 people.
A consistent trend was seen in the UK and South Africa. However, while the number of citizens in the former nation moving to New Zealand markedly increased to 8000 in 2005, that of the latter gradually dropped to only over 2000 people in the last studied year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.921875 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.508962883 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4933420058 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.125 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253004424806 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113634685449 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10226487378 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171112646681 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103452851796 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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