The following table gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below.
The supplied table reveals the standard of living based on four economic indicators in five nations including Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia and the USA in 1982.
In general, it can be clearly observed that while America presented the highest life quality, the opposite was true for Bangladesh in the list of countries examined.
As shown in the table, it is noticeable that GNP per head in the US took the lead with 13160 dollars, which almost doubling the Egypt. Following were Bolivia and Indonesia, both were just less than 600 US dollars. In contrast, standing at $140, Bangladesh showed a negligible figure.
Similar to the pattern of the income figure, America and Egypt ranked first in terms of daily calorie intake per person, at 3653 and 2950 respectively, which were much higher in comparison with that of Bangladesh, at 1877. Moreover, the amount of calorie Bangladesh people and Indonesian consumed was quite considerable, at around 2000 per head.
Furthermore, longevity witnessed a highest rate in the USA, at 74 years old, which two times higher than that one of Bangladesh. Besides, the three remaining nations had inconsiderable life expectancy rate (around 50 years old).
When it comes to death toll among infants, Bangladesh held the largest share, at 132 out of 1000 births. Followed by Bolivia at 124 which shows a ten-fold level compared to America. In addition, standing in the third and fourth place were Egypt and Indonesia with substantial numbers of 97 and 87 per 1000 deaths correspondingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, third, while, in addition, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.128 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79026880426 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 106.607317073 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4306599331 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 5.23603664747 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.07145679119 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285023392122 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329378257448 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.042405282841 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314651344776 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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