the following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European ADULTS in 1985 and 1995 .
A glance at the two pie charts provided the rate of pastime in european between adults through in 10 years.
As you can see european adults perefer to spend most percentage of free time on watching tv in comperation other activite.However,eating out and talking with family slip dramaticly.Although cooking is timeconsuming but people belive that it is so healthier than eat their meal in the restorants or out.
Whatching tv is the most papular leisure but approximatly are the same in though the years.Playing computer games had the bigest portion in 1995 with 27% .it is clear people in douring the time prefer playing computer games in stead of eating out and talking with family.
it is cristal clear that the rate of talking with family and eating out slip respectedly from 18% and 23% to 7% and 8% as well.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society.Others,however,believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- the following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European ADULTS in 1985 and 1995 . 56
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pullution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?What other measures do you think might be effective? 78
- The elderly people of over 50 years of age should be retired and be replaced by the young Do you agree or disagree 52
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...etween adults through in 10 years. As you can see european adults perefer to ...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...tching tv in comperation other activite.However,eating out and talking with family slip...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , eating
...tv in comperation other activite.However,eating out and talking with family slip dramat...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...and talking with family slip dramaticly.Although cooking is timeconsuming but people bel...
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Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Playing
...imatly are the same in though the years.Playing computer games had the bigest portion i...
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Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... had the bigest portion in 1995 with 27% .it is clear people in douring the time p...
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Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
... the time prefer playing computer games in stead of eating out and talking with family. ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ating out and talking with family. it is cristal clear that the rate of talki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87943262411 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17382027755 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7478133832 43.030603864 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.0 112.824112599 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.25 22.9334400587 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0995761401677 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692831289584 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747763262152 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692831289584 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747763262152 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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