A glance at the picture provides an illustration of how an orange juice is manufactured.
A glance at the picture provides an illustration of how an orange juice is manufactured.
Overall, it is clear from the given data is that there are 16 phases starting with fetching oranges to the factory and ending with delivering the boxes of juice to the supermarkets. From the given process all steps are linked to each other respectively.
Looking at the info in details, tge supplied process commences with bringing the mature fruit to the fabric by lorry. Then, oranges are washed. Once,they have been pet into minicing-machine, the process comes to the next stage in which the extract of oranges is separated into fresh juice and waste solid. Next, the peels of the oranges are given to the animal. The fresh juice is also disjoined two parts. The fresh juice is packed and conveyed to the shop in ome part of them. And the next separated part involvel evaporating the fresh juice which is carried by refrigrator truck. In this step the juice splits to water. Afterwards,the concentrate juice is canned. Then,the bins are sent to the warehouse with the help of a special car. In the next phase, the foodstuff in the cans is procured the the next factory and this is followed by adding water to them. Once,the final stage has been completed, the packaged juices are borne to the shop.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80530973451 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6458549096 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535398230088 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5857265117 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284739486817 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10156324911 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204095260894 0.0843802449381 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.342709415948 0.15604864568 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.365829134381 0.0819641961636 446% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.