Global warming
The international community has long recognized that global warming has become a major challenge to many countries in all regions of the world. This essay will discuss the causes as well as the consequences of global warming, and then examine some solutions that may help improve the situation.
Global warming occurs due to both human and natural impacts; however, natural impacts such as volcano, solar radiation are not remarkable when comparing with human impacts. Scientists have determined that human activities are a major contribution to global warming by discharging a large amount of substances causing greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide, methane into the atmosphere, and the specific causes are the burning fossil fuels and deforestation. Firstly, human burn coal for power plants, burn gasoline for transportation, or use oil, coal, gas for heating cooking process, so we have freed large amount of greenhouse gases into the atmosphere. Moreover, deforestation is also a significant cause leading to the greenhouse effect because the deforestation, green lung for life is no longer, meaning that the adsorption CO2 process also will lose.
Global warming brings about many serious consequences to mankind. The most predominant effect may be an increase in natural disaster such as droughts, floods, storm, etc. Rising temperature leads to changes in climate and weather, which can accelerate the species go extinct. An obvious consequence is that when global warming, melting of the polar ice caps make to rise sea level, in turn, encroach land. Until one day, people will not have enough land to live.
Tackling these problems will not be easy, but there are several ways to reduce the effects. Firstly, government should reduce our dependence on fossil fuels and adopt stricter laws to individuals or organization who make polluted air. For example, we can use plant-derived plastics, biodiesel, wind power, solar power and plant tree to reduce CO2 emissions. Moreover, education is also an useful tool to help people know how to use electricity effectively and how to prevent global warming timely.
In conclusion, global warming is a serious issue need to be addressed immediately. If measures are taken effectively, we can prevent serious problem which may happen with it.
Global warming
The international community has long recognized that global warming has become a major challenge to many countries in all regions of the world. This essay will discuss the causes as well as the consequences of global warming, and then examine some solutions that may help improve the situation.
Global warming occurs due to both human and natural impacts; however, natural impacts such as volcano, solar radiation are not remarkable when comparing with human impacts. Scientists have determined that human activities are a major contribution to global warming by discharging a large amount of substances causing greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide, methane into the atmosphere, and the specific causes are the burning fossil fuels and deforestation. Firstly, human burn coal for power plants, burn gasoline for transportation, or use oil, coal, gas for heating cooking process, so we have freed large amount of greenhouse gases into the atmosphere. Moreover, deforestation is also a significant cause leading to the greenhouse effect because the deforestation, green lung for life is no longer, meaning that the adsorption CO2 process also will lose.
Global warming brings about many serious consequences to mankind. The most predominant effect may be an increase in natural disaster such as droughts, floods, storm, etc. Rising temperature leads to changes in climate and weather, which can accelerate the species go extinct. An obvious consequence is that when global warming, melting of the polar ice caps make to rise sea level, in turn, encroach land. Until one day, people will not have enough land to live.
Tackling these problems will not be easy, but there are several ways to reduce the effects. Firstly, government should reduce our dependence on fossil fuels and adopt stricter laws to individuals or organization who make polluted air. For example, we can use plant-derived plastics, biodiesel, wind power, solar power and plant tree to reduce CO2 emissions. Moreover, education is also an useful tool to help people know how to use electricity effectively and how to prevent global warming timely.
In conclusion, global warming is a serious issue need to be addressed immediately. If measures are taken effectively, we can prevent serious problem which may happen with it.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as for', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278450363196 0.268076937826 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.154963680387 0.116061578633 134% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111380145278 0.0759168565197 147% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0532687651332 0.0366838410393 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0121065375303 0.0131127313244 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0823244552058 0.155750635184 53% => OK
Participles: 0.043583535109 0.0379272487307 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85506581308 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0363196125908 0.0210936926555 172% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0726392251816 0.0948980150116 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0266343825666 0.00437022459523 609% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0193704600484 0.00967000014798 200% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2430.0 1161.00487805 209% => OK
No of words: 364.0 196.9 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.67582417582 5.90752243213 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 3.73763899035 117% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.414835164835 0.337110787985 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.318681318681 0.247514529752 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208791208791 0.171178102325 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14010989011 0.112407865282 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85506581308 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 106.607317073 206% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.546246751206 111% => OK
Word variations: 71.9740678643 49.3433353143 146% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 8.93414634146 190% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 21.4117647059 23.0094962315 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2768698429 42.9750493124 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.941176471 135.714022679 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 23.0094962315 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.941176470588 0.689975730869 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.84146341463 156% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.48048780488 473% => OK
Readability: 53.279896574 47.7609492067 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.83516483516 2.94281807926 62% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4694791647 0.418131533498 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0913016748359 0.181151798455 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0570555007708 0.0850326197045 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.545515217813 0.706616315825 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162467060945 0.157042692854 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160233564604 0.228904883108 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.201491087413 0.108899403657 185% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.228239625184 0.367819155151 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.046505586295 0.0812612215331 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298546379621 0.316326947829 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.220923296147 0.0921553760075 240% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70731707317 243% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.14146341463 350% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 7.1512195122 168% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.