global water use and water consumption in Congo and brazil
The chart shows global water use in three different sectors over a hundred year period, and water consumption in two different countries in three aspects of comparison in 2000. three sectors of water use from 1900 had increased in 2000. sequentially agriculture was more dominant than industrial and domestic. developments indicated by water use in agriculture after 1900 increased until 2000 which hit a high off more than 3000 km^3 of usage. then followed by two other sectors, industrial use experienced an increase to 1200 km^3 and domestic use increase to 500 Km^3 in 2000. specific use of water consumption in brazil and Congo shown more significant thorough the human population in country, where the population in brazil (178 million) was bigger than Congo (5.2 million). beside that, the other reason which influenced the water consumption was irrigation land where brazil had 26,500 km^2 than Congo which had 100 km^2. furthermore, the comparison of consuming water per person in the population and irrigated land result that Brazil had ratio which was higher totally 359 m^3 than that in Congo lower only 8 m^3. overall, we can say that water consumption in brazil and Congo in two aspects, population and irrigated land can give calculation of water consumption per person given the data contribution to domestic use in global water use graph.
- graph of global water consumption in three sectors (Agriculture, industrial use, domestic use) in 1900-2000 and table water consumption in two differen countires Brazil and Congo with three sectors of measuremen (Population, irrigated land, water consump 73
- graph of global water consumption in three sectors (Agriculture, industrial use, domestic use) in 1900-2000 and table water consumption in two differen countires Brazil and Congo with three sectors of measuremen (Population, irrigated land, water consump 67
- global water use and water consumption in Congo and brazil 56
- graph of global water consumption in three sectors (Agriculture, industrial use, domestic use) in 1900-2000 and table water consumption in two differen countires Brazil and Congo with three sectors of measuremen (Population, irrigated land, water consump 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Developments
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Suggestion: Then
... high off more than 3000 km^3 of usage. then followed by two other sectors, industri...
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Suggestion: Specific
...estic use increase to 500 Km^3 in 2000. specific use of water consumption in brazil and ...
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Suggestion: Beside
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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Suggestion: Overall
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72821786964 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502262443439 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.030398394 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.514669265691 0.215688989381 239% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225768190885 0.103423049105 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154539282569 0.0843802449381 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.514669265691 0.15604864568 330% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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