Grandparents take care of children when their parents are out of work .
what are the advantages and possible disadvantages of this
In this epoch, both parents are busy in their hectic schedule of work to earn more money for the swiftly growing financial requirements. So, usually grandparents take care of their grandchildren when they are at job. Although there are certain disadvantages associated with this approach, the upsides in this case seems to be heavier than downsides.
To embark, this trend have it share of drawbacks. For one, the generation gap is created and old people cannot develop understanding with the children. Moreover,this leads to awful precedent and results conflict in relationship. Another negative aspect is physical health limitation in old people. For example, kid of age 9 years wants to play soccer with grandpa but unfortunately grandpa don't have that much enthusiasm to cope up with younger one.
Despite these drawbacks;however, a stronger case of taking care results. To Elaborate, grandparents always motivate children to move in a right direction in their career. Owning to this , they always encourage the child to study instead of doing useless activities like watching TV and surfing internet for long time. It can also be argued that grandparents are the best friends as well as teacher. This is because they teach the child how to judge disparity between what is wrong or right with the help of their experienced eyes. In addition to that, children can share their feelings and emotions with them. Finally, adolescents are more safe at home with old people since they spent full day at home with them.
In conclusion, while there are certain cons to this approach, it is largely beneficial as it helps to ease loneliness in home and prevents from uncertainties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 274.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14598540146 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91645885131 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 106.607317073 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1132054474 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.125 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245030524396 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737319993273 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683621911019 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136015078574 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112396411178 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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