The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The designated bar histogram beneath proclaims proportion of both genders of different age in Australia who are doing daily physical task in the year 2010.
From the given chart, we can exemplify that the age group between 15 to 24 years of male and female have activity 52% and 47.7% respectively. After that, regular physical venture in next of men went down and where proportion of women of doing task fluctuates about 1% in positive side. Then again same results were obtaining in 35 to 40 48 with minor decrease and increase in percentage.
However, the male and female above 45 and below 54 reveals shot up in performing activities much but, after that women section of next group shows consistently growth because men were gaining slowly in doing daily activity. At in the last group both genders encapsulate similar percentage of regular physical activity that is nearly 47%.
Finally, from the chart we can perceptible that group Till the age group 35 to 44 of man were doing less activity compare to women. However, after that both gender steady growth incline and in the end the rate of activity was constant.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-27 | tranhien297 | 67 | view |
| 2020-01-24 | BIBHU KALITA | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-23 | jason Lou | 11 | view |
| 2020-01-23 | jason Lou | 67 | view |
| 2020-01-09 | Noah1997 | 78 | view |
- Some people think that there are benefits in going to private Secondary School. Feels that private Secondary Schools have negative on the society as a whole. Discuss both the points. 78
- You and some friends had dinner in a restaurant a few Nights ago the service at restaurant was terrible and food was bad you and two of your friends had severe stomachaches the following day The food was also overpriced Write to the manager of a restauran 71
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. 56
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 84
- You are going to visit New Zealand for an ‘English and Homestay’ program.You have just received details of your homestay host family.Write your first letter to the family. In your letter introduce yourself ask the family some questions to get in 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...signated bar histogram beneath proclaims proportion of both genders of different ...
^^
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... where proportion of women of doing task fluctuates about 1% in positive side. Th...
^^
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d below 54 reveals shot up in performing activities much but, after that women se...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88541666667 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51451946895 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1195282163 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349769835588 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132051644178 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724849078273 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198304617736 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034372422501 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.