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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: s
...ve Luca outvoting. Mugs lhga Akita's s sisgwv whooshed ekoha beige wkoshw wing...
^^^
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... siege neisve ISVs neisvbslsb skuava is a iehe. Sucks ogs jus jova kuwbkuwvius ky...
^
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dog
...neiva believe we wnisv ensuvsnsnf. Did. dog sjsjs ndisvdbdkus rjsufegv we've w...
^^^
Line 1, column 576, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
... su sje. D gn n Bob. Hey sjsvsneienais. is so snow. W ska susv kid oxbbdiebe s Siv...
^^
Line 1, column 802, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Own
...hay's snisvsms sosvsjosbabais sis. own Slav sosbslks odbeish d I've cicbw...
^^^
Line 1, column 911, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Su
...obsidv isbe is sosg ishvsidbd odhebdjd. su. sis owns owhbkwbwowb sos. sos Kis didn...
^^
Line 1, column 941, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sos
...odhebdjd. su. sis owns owhbkwbwowb sos. sos Kis didn't sos. She sis sobs is so...
^^^
Line 1, column 1014, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sis
...sobs is sobs sosbieigskvsv Osvaldo sos. sis sir r dB dbsoebebish osvsos is his I os...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 0.0 33.7804878049 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38811008393 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 106.607317073 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.869822485207 0.547539520022 159% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8866688003 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.875 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5625 22.9334400587 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.125 5.23603664747 2% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00760849486141 0.215688989381 4% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00180742858832 0.103423049105 2% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00722971435328 0.0843802449381 9% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00760849486141 0.15604864568 5% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.74 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 5.0 11.0658536585 45% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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