The graph and table illustrate the average monthly climate and the normal number of hours of sunshine in New York, Sydney and London
Overall, in the graph we can see that the highest temperature is identified in New York. It is below 30 degrees when in London 24 degrees and in Sydney 16 degrees.
The lowest temperature in graph is in New York, it is about 4 degrees in January. Still in this period Sydney’s is higher 25 degrees.
There is a sharp decline in temperature in Sydney between June and August. A sharply increasing degree is seen in New York in this period. But until October New York’s climate decreases sharply till the beginning of December, and temperature increases in Sydney at this time.
However, the table shows that the shiniest city is New York, in this mega polis the number of shiny hours a year is 2535 and the second one is in Sydney with 2473 hours, and lowest one is in London with 1180 hours.
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 73
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 61
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... sunshine in New York, Sydney and London Overall, in the graph we can see that th...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...York, it is about 4 degrees in January. Still in this period Sydney’s is higher 25 de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61904761905 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41766341162 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511904761905 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7065491276 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207714244262 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796919423096 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090604392957 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134595652497 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110819097937 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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