The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the mean temperatures per month and the table represents the total annual hours of sunshine in New York, London and Sydney.

Overall, New York and London are much warmer cities, but the temperatures tend to drop, whereas it increases in Sydney.

Now turning to the details, in January, London experiences higher temperatures than New York, but Sydney is far higher than other two cities at more than 25. Then, it declines slightly for Sydney, rises for London and New York. From May, New York gets warmer dramatically until it reaches its highest point to nearly 30, whilst in London to 24. After the summer, the standard temperatures in London and New York decrease significantly over the next five months. In December, the lowest average temperatures record for New York is to 5 and for London is to 10.

In contrast, in Sydney, temperatures go down from March, and it continues to move downward rapidly. This figure shoots up at 16 in July, followed by, a considerable jump until December, while other cities experience well below. On the other hand, the highest number of sunshine stands at 2,535 throughout the year in New York, Sydney at 2,473 and London at 1,180.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, then, well, whereas, while, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9375 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6311696656 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581730769231 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3156954548 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.7 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115385840163 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053307205818 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646566020669 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977203355644 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772600887045 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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