The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The line graph and table under demonstrate the middle monthly temperatures and total annual hours of sunshine each year in London, New York and Sydney.
Overall, in New Your city the average temperature was increase significantly until July and after that was dropped however in Sydney the temperature was the lowest in July. Whereas the average number of hours of sunshine in Sydney was the highest on the contrary in London was the lowest.
In London the temperature was the lowest approximately 8°C in Janury, after that the temperature reached a pick in July and August about 23℃. However in Sydney the temperature was the highest over 25℃ in January and then was fallen since March until July. In New York at the beginnig and at the end of the year the temperature was the lowest about 5℃ and achieved the highest temperature in July around 30℃.
The average propotion of hour sunshine in Sydney was 2,473. The highest number was 2,535 in New York city. In London the lowest annual hour of sunshine was 1,180.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the temperature was the lowest in July. Whereas the average number of hours of sunshine...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ed a pick in July and August about 23℃. However in Sydney the temperature was the highe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, whereas, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83522727273 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50458644373 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426136363636 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2452848645 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5555555556 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199987035522 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104711068605 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586012123239 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148736380834 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455899082296 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.