Graph Average daily traffic volumes in the London area

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Graph: Average daily traffic volumes in the London area

The graph below illustrate the average transportation volumes in the London area in a 24-hour period from midnight to midnight.

Overall, it focuses on three means of transport: using cars, buses or going underground.
The first thing to notice is the extremely distinctive high number during the two rush-hour of approximately 7am to 10am and 5pm to 7pm regarding the total number, respectively with over 3 millions and around 3.5 millions of people. In terms of car there is another lower peak between 2pm and 4pm with only a sixth of the volume of the highest point.

Travelling underground is the most popular way to navigate London with about 1 million passenger at any given time of a day except for the period between 2am and 4am. In second place is the bus with an average of 0.5 million and the car is the least used. Comparing to the other kinds, the bus has quite a steady stream of passengers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...ively with over 3 millions and around 3.5 millions of people. In terms of car there is anothe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, second, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71875 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67475904289 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66875 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8246284506 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157952829769 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692047810798 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106813897611 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103556998171 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128700391794 0.0819641961636 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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