The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graph shows the number of visitors to two different web sites regarding music in 15 days.
Overall, it is clear that the Pop Parade site had more public interest than Music Choice site within these two weeks, despite the time between day 12 to 13 when the visiting number of music choice site overtook Pop Parade site.
Starting at 120,000 people visiting Pop parade site, which was 3 times more than the initial figure for Music Choice site, this figure showed a dramatic downward to roughly 35,000 people on the 7th day. At the beginning of the second week, both sites experienced the same visit amount of approximately 20 thousand to 40 thousand.
On the 9th day, the number of visits to Pop parade site started to grow dramatically to 150 thousand, meanwhiles only 20 thousand people browsed the Music Choice site. However, there was a rapid increase of 100,000 visits to Music Choice website from day 11 to day 12, following with a decrease to 80,000 to the rest of the days. On the contrary, after a sharp dip to day 13, the figure for Pop Parade rose as high as 15,000 on day15.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-07-04 | Sarina2021 | 73 | view |
| 2021-09-23 | Sanaullah97 | 73 | view |
| 2021-09-23 | Sanaullah97 | 61 | view |
| 2021-08-29 | Phạm Thi | 73 | view |
| 2020-10-17 | Nicholas Sukardi | 67 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, second, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62755102041 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29749945559 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576530612245 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0673863121 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.571428571 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191181545165 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107921267715 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688521395823 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15328109387 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543911677787 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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