The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The number of visits to new music websites is shown in the graph. The X-axis represents days, while Y-axis shows a number of visitors in thousands. Two sites are shown: music choice and pop parade.
It can be concluded from the graph, that there were wild fluctuations over the period shown.
The pop parade started off with approximately 120 thousand visitors during and the figure slightly changed over the next 2 days. Then, it dropped to 100 thousand of people and fluctuated until the ninths day, when it had solely 40 thousand visitors. The next day, the pop parade was visited by 30 thousand people, before the line kept going up till fourteens day, and stopped at 120 thousand people. The last day, website had only about 70 thousand people.
Music choice had 40 thousand of people on its first day and then went down to 20 thousand. During the next 9 days, the line fluctuated and always was under 40 thousand. The next day, its figure rocketed to 120 thousand and was stable for the next 2 days. The line finished at about 70 thousand people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ninths'' or 'ninth's'?
Suggestion: ninths'; ninth's
...sand of people and fluctuated until the ninths day, when it had solely 40 thousand vis...
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Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e finished at about 70 thousand people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68983957219 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30354072367 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566844919786 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7611768305 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0833333333 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100261566849 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624317037773 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104602419647 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976755220145 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109720397324 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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