The given line graph depicts the amount of energy consumed in America since 1980 with projected used until 2030.
What stands out from the graph is that fossil fuels have surpassed alternative energies since 1980 and are predicted to increase in the last 10 years. Petrol and oil have been the dominant energy used by U.S people over the period shown.
Fossil fuels are the main energy in the USA, among which petrol and oil accounted for the highest mount at 35 quad in 1980, followed by natural gas at 20 quad and coal at 15 quad which was below a half comparing with petrol and oil. From 1980 to 2020, Americans preferred using petrol and oil the most and tend to continue to put this energy in use until 2030. After a slight fluctuation, coal overtook natural gas and become the second main energy used in this country in the future.
Surprisingly, the three mentioned renewable energies started at about 3.5 quad, while there were small surge in the consumption of nuclear and solar/ wind powers with slightly higher projection in 2030, the amount of energy created from hydropower witnessed a period of oscillation over the period shown.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...have been the dominant energy used by U.S people over the period shown. Fossil f...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'quad' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'quads'.
Suggestion: quads
...l accounted for the highest mount at 35 quad in 1980, followed by natural gas at 20 ...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'quad' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'quads'.
Suggestion: quads
...y natural gas at 20 quad and coal at 15 quad which was below a half comparing with p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d of oscillation over the period shown.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77386934673 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30673519217 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9424373073 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.714285714 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308974042878 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146431892662 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975502467938 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206270325217 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776540249133 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.