The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030

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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The given linegraph depicts the amount of energy consumed in America since 1980 with projected used until 2030.
What stands out from the graph is that fossil fues have been dominant since 1980 and are predicted to increase in the last 10 years. By contrast, the figures for alternative energy witnessed a slight rise with expectation for a considerable stability until 2030. Petrol and oil have been mainly used by U.S people over the period shown.
The main energy in the USA is fossil fues. Among them, petrol and oil accounted for the highest mount at 35 quar in 1980, followed by natural gas at 20 quar and coal was below a half comparing with petrol and oil. From 1980 to 2020, Petrol and oil was always the main kind of enery in the USA with a prediction for an upward trend until 2030. After a slight fluctuation, coal overtook natural gas and become the second main energy used in this country in the future.
Turning to alternative sources of enery consumption in 1980 with the same starting point at about 3.5 quar, whille there were small surge in the consumption of nuclear and solar/ wind powers with slightly higher projection in 2030, the amount of energy created from hydropower witnessed a period of ocsiliation over the period shown.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74429223744 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38076078901 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.216066901 43.030603864 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.444444444 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333363963464 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136142840462 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900523616014 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216999318703 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519588238863 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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