The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the alteration regarding birth and mortality rate had happened in past from year 1901 and the prediction for upcoming years.
Overall, the birth rate is mostly high according to figures of previous years and the death proportion is lower. However, the prediction figure clearly indicates the trend of mortality will increase, whereas the birthrate will fall in future.
In the year 1901, only 10000 people were die and its double amount of people were born. There were plenty of fluctuations in figures of birth till the year 2020. but now the trend in stable at about 50000 birth rate per year. The future figures are almost contrast as every year the death rate is increasing at rapid pace. It can be seen that from the year 1921 the numbers are raised by about 10000 death per year.
The noticeable point will be in the year 2041 where both born and death rate will become equal that is about 50000. After that the percentage of born people will fall gradually and the prediction claim that it will stop at 40000 till the year 2101. On the other hand, the the ratio of death rate will definitely rise in high speed till 2061 and after that it will be stable for upcoming years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...crease, whereas the birthrate will fall in future. In the year 1901, only 10000 people...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...in figures of birth till the year 2020. but now the trend in stable at about 50000 ...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... till the year 2101. On the other hand, the the ratio of death rate will definitely ris...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... till the year 2101. On the other hand, the the ratio of death rate will definitely ris...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, regarding, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66046511628 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1689085765 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.49335006 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0909090909 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123813500191 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592380723958 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355515355502 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827512352065 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173126188152 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.