The given line graph provides an overview about the income which is spent by folks in united kingdom.The vertical axis represents the proportion of varied categories such as food,education and entertainment and the horizontal axis indicates about the divergent kinds of people.
It is crystal clear that, the highly 70% income is spent on food by poorest people in the united kingdom as compare with other people but it decreases rapidly to 40% from 70%.However,the expenditure income of poor masses climbs similarly from 1% to 25% in education and amusement but the proportion shows the constant spending of 30% income by middle class of people in education and the income of middle class folks in food and entertainment illustrates the steadily downfall of almost 10%.Furthermore,the income of richest people declines dramatically in food and education but it escalates rapidly to 30% from 15% in the field of amusement.
Overall,it can be clearly notified that,the big chunk of money is spent by poor people for food except education and entertainment and rich people spend high their percent of income for doing an entertainment rather than food and education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, similarly, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10253535721 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 22.4926829268 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.883357005 43.030603864 423% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.666666667 112.824112599 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.3333333333 22.9334400587 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.3333333333 5.23603664747 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102776697024 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775066708148 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0130994287807 0.0843802449381 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775066708148 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130994287807 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.6 13.2329268293 261% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.55 61.2550243902 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.51609756098 279% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 10.3012195122 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.4329268293 262% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.9970731707 244% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.