the graph below show the annual expenditure of university students in three countries in 2003

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ountries in 2003. Looking at the graph,it is immediately obvious that money expen...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
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Suggestion: except; except for
...countries registered the highest figure with the exception of that country C.Furthermore,Country C re...
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...re with the exception of that country C.Furthermore,Country C recorded the most significant...
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... exception of that country C.Furthermore,Country C recorded the most significant differe...
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...on per student in country A stood at 45% ,which was 10% higher than that of countr...
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...ch was 10% higher than that of country B .Money for books in country B, which was ...
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... was 10% higher than that of country B .Money for books in country B, which was 12% ,...
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...ey for books in country B, which was 12% , quadrupled than the figure for country ...
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...quadrupled than the figure for country A .In addition,money for leisure in country...
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...adrupled than the figure for country A .In addition,money for leisure in country A...
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...an the figure for country A .In addition,money for leisure in country A ,B and money f...
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... addition,money for leisure in country A ,B and money for other in country A ,B wa...
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...ry A ,B and money for other in country A ,B was not different much , 22%,20%,8%,6%...
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...r in country A ,B was not different much , 22%,20%,8%,6% respectively .Compare to ...
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Line 7, column 340, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ferent much , 22%,20%,8%,6% respectively .Compare to 22% for food in country A, fo...
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Suggestion: Compare
...rent much , 22%,20%,8%,6% respectively .Compare to 22% for food in country A, food in c...
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...ry B accounted for 27% In country C , money consumption per student in others...
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...student in others was the lowest with 1% .Compare to 12% of leisure ,the percentag...
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...udent in others was the lowest with 1% .Compare to 12% of leisure ,the percentage of mo...
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...owest with 1% .Compare to 12% of leisure ,the percentage of money for food was tri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15028901734 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30007023936 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526011560694 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 213.087423374 43.030603864 495% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.75 112.824112599 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.25 22.9334400587 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232145555614 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155988660765 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130273674812 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178338496345 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108288335956 0.0819641961636 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.2329268293 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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