The graph below shows the acid level in mouth from consumption of sugar and honey. Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay.
The given line graph the information about the three acid level in mouth consumption within by fruit sugarcane. Sugar and honey and the eating sweet foods produces in the mouth from tooth decay after that measured by the PM values. It is cheats and coherent representation.
It is clearly seen that the acid level in mouth from consumption of sugar and honey and the high PM level of increasingly acidity that is neutral. Moreover the PM level of fruit cane which was plunge out from 5 minutes and the PM level is nearly about 4.5.Futhermore what had been that there is slight increase from 10 minutes when the PM level is 5.In addition to this, then it was gradually rockt up within 35 minutes and the PM level has been 6.5.However,
the can sugar have been gradually decline from 5 minutes and ph value become least that is 3.5. After 5 minutes, sugar cane slowly increase and then reached within35 minutes at 6.5 ph level.
Moving further, which was honey the ph level had been data 5 and then remain stable 5 to 10 minutes. After that it was slightly increase during 25 minutes and ph level 7.
overall, it is evident that the acid level in mouth due to sugar cane is maximum than fruit sugar and honey
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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...s and the PM level has been 6.5.However, the can sugar have been gradually declin...
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...ne is maximum than fruit sugar and honey
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56621004566 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38214412266 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465753424658 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.205992489 43.030603864 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.0 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376186416826 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197914961632 0.103423049105 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152893360358 0.0843802449381 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232853419542 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14480814045 0.0819641961636 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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