The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The line graph compares how much money was spend on books in four countries (Germany, France, Italy and Austria) in ten-year period between 1995 and 2005

Overall, the amount of money on buying books increased in all four nations and Germany was the biggest spender on books despite of the slightly decrease between 1999 and 2003.

Initially, Italy and France spent about as much as each other. However, since 1999, France began to spend more money and the gap had widened. In 2005, money spent on books in France reached just below 70 million while Italy only spent slightly above 60 million.

As can be seen from the graph, in 1995, Austria spent the least amount on books, only 30 million. The spending on books of Austria climbed steadily to 40 million in 1999 and the remained stable before it dramatically increase in 2001. Austria had surpass Italy and become the third the third largest spender in 2005.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... line graph compares how much money was spend on books in four countries Germany, Fra...
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Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'the third'.
Suggestion: the third
...1. Austria had surpass Italy and become the third the third largest spender in 2005.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'third', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222857142857 0.268076937826 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.131428571429 0.116061578633 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0628571428571 0.0759168565197 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0571428571429 0.0366838410393 156% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00571428571429 0.0131127313244 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.165714285714 0.155750635184 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0457142857143 0.0379272487307 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.11139278451 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0114285714286 0.0210936926555 54% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0742857142857 0.0948980150116 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00571428571429 0.00437022459523 131% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00571428571429 0.00967000014798 59% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 918.0 1161.00487805 79% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.9 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81012658228 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322784810127 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240506329114 0.247514529752 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.120253164557 0.171178102325 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0253164556962 0.112407865282 23% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.11139278451 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.546246751206 105% => OK
Word variations: 48.9408421199 49.3433353143 99% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5714285714 23.0094962315 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.0946651725 42.9750493124 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 135.714022679 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 23.0094962315 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.689975730869 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 46.6220614828 47.7609492067 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.23529411765 2.94281807926 76% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.58793410109 0.418131533498 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.154821435365 0.181151798455 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0788479699689 0.0850326197045 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.707772071449 0.706616315825 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18840558059 0.157042692854 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.278877093023 0.228904883108 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115059388806 0.108899403657 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.281029661182 0.367819155151 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0627134864593 0.0812612215331 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.399636173171 0.316326947829 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448183579971 0.0921553760075 49% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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