The graph below shows the amount of UK investments in clean energy from 2008 to 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words You should spend about 20 m

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The graph below shows the amount of UK investments in clean energy from 2008 to 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar graph gives the details of money spent on clean energy by UK in seven years from 2008 to 2015.It is clear that,in 2014 their investment on wind energy is more compare to in the year 2008.

However there has been a gradual increase and decrease in the investment on different forms of clean energy during seven-years .In 2009 the investment on wind energy has suddenly increased (from billion pounds to billion pounds).UK government has financed less on energy smart technologies.The figure remains same for energy smart technologies till 2014,but a slight increase was observed in 2015.

It is obvious that ,UK authorities has started financing solar energy from 2010 with a very small figure of half billion pounds.In the next three consecutive years their investment on solar energy remains same,in 2014 an increase of about billion pounds was observed.again in 2015 it fell back to the same figure.

Overall, the UK has financed more on wind energy , secondly on solar energy and thirdly on other forms of energy.However they financed least on energy smart technologies

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17514124294 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76377088255 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564971751412 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.2669361147 43.030603864 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 229.0 112.824112599 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.25 22.9334400587 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 5.23603664747 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165316798339 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117182978879 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347800904368 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117182978879 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347800904368 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.2329268293 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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