The line graph displays average number of carbon dioxide emission per person in four countries,which are united kingdom,sweden,Italy Portugal from 1967 to 2007. unit measured in metric tonnes.
Overall,total amount of carbon dioxide emissions per person wasn't charged much during that period. However the amount was increased continuously in Italy and Portugal, while it was decreased a lot in United kingdom and Sweden.
First of all,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 33.7804878049 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 372.0 965.302439024 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 66.0 196.424390244 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63636363636 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.85026988277 3.73543355544 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27553190712 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 52.0 106.607317073 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.787878787879 0.547539520022 144% => OK
syllable_count: 114.3 283.868780488 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9549819051 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31142679682 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130862514882 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129992687746 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253936457512 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951514484942 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.54 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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