The given graph illustrates average carbon dioxide emissions per individuals in 4 different Europe countries , namely United Kingdom , Sweden , Italy and Portugal over a period of 40 years , starting from 1967.
Overall , it can be clearly seen that carbon dioxide emmissions in Portugal and Italy increased , while the emmission of carbon dioxide in United Kingdom and Sweden decreased during the period shown . Moreover , this data of Portugal was always the lowest.
Among 4 countries , carbon dioxide emisions in Portugal was the lowest , it approximately 1,7 metric tonnes . This figure increased significantly to 3,7 metric tonnes in 1987 , and this was followed by a sharp rose to 4,6 in 1997. After that , carbon dioxide emissions in portugal was remained stable until 2007 . On the countrary , United Kingdom was the highest of carbon dioxide emmissions in 1967. This figure stayed the same until 1977 , after which carbon dioxide emissions decreased dramatically from 11 to 8.8 tonnes in 2007.
After carbon dioxide emissions in Italy went up sharply from 4,4 to 6,4 tonnes in 1977 , this data continued to increase slighly to 7,8 tonnes in 1997 , and then remained stable until 2007 . In Sweden , carbon dioxide emmissions increased dramatically from 8,9 to about 10,2 tonnes in 1997 , at which point this figure went down gradually to 5,8 until 2007.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22685185185 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67334127027 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490740740741 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2503658524 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.9 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237417754876 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120193314106 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718708729036 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178355748244 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538425271401 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.