The graph illustrates the average amount of CO2 emissions per unit of population in four countries including the United Kingdom, Italy, Sweden and Portugal, which were produced over 40 years from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric tonnes.
Overall, the British pumped the most amount of CO2 into the air over period given, while for Sweden, which used to rank just below the UK at the first half of the period, released the least amount of CO2 in the last year. In contrast, there was a steady increase in the emissions produced by Italy and Portugal over 40 years.
First of all, the CO2 released by the British was decrease moderately from under 11 to around 9 metric tonnes between 1967 and 2007. With regards to the emissions Sweden released, it began at almost 9 metric tonnes and then peaked at above 10 metric tonnes in 1977 before falling dramatically to nearly 5 metric tonnes in the final years.
In contrast, the amount of CO2 emissions was risen substantially in both Italy and Portugal over 40 years, as shown in the growth from marginally above 4 metric tonnes to slightly under 8 metric tonnes and from approximately 1 metric tonne to about 5 metric tonnes respectively.
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- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, while, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80288461538 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50708592686 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4337781938 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.714285714 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1593836183 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891686534376 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590093459694 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113050485197 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636671092005 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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