the graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the united kingdoms, sweden, itlay, and portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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the graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the united kingdoms, sweden, itlay, and portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph reveals the emissions of carbon dioxide by each person in the UK, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 to 2007. The data has been calibrated in metric tonnes.
Overall, it is quite evident, the emissions from Italy and Portugal increased while there was a decline in UK and Sweden.
At first, Looking at the figures for Portugal, in 1967 carbon dioxide emitted was 1.5 tonnes which rose to around 3.5 tonnes by 1987. In between 1987 to 1997, there was a gradual increase, however, it remained stagnant to 4.5 by 2007. Similarly, emissions in Italy also soured over time. In the beginning, average emission per person was 4.2 in 1967 later this reached 4.2 tonnes in 1977 and finally skyrocketed to 7.8 tonnes in the year 2007. Moving onto Sweden, at first, the figures peaked at 10.2 in 1977 from 8.2 in 1967 but surprisingly; it plunged to 6.5 in 1987 and 5.8 in 2007. The United Kingdom had the maximum emissions since the beginning. In 1967 it is clearly visible the emissions were 10.3 metric tonnes which had a slight fall after a certain period and eventually dropped to 8.3 in 2007.
To conclude, one can say carbon dioxide emissions were maximum in UK and minimum in Portugal during the entire period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, look, similarly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69302325581 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38784555234 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544186046512 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3438346112 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7272727273 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345542052977 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126169977226 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103622756425 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207793836061 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870796646785 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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