The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Vista Cafe by season Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Vista
Cafe, by season.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph shows how many servings of certain food items are sold on
average every day in two different seasons at the Vista Cafe. The average number
of sales of each item changed with the season.

Certain food items had much higher sales than others in the winter. Hot
coffee had the highest number of sales, with an average of 75 servings sold daily.
Following this, the item with the second highest number of sales was soup, with
an average of 50 servings sold daily. Salad and ice cream had average daily sales
of 25 servings each, and iced coffee had the lowest number of sales, with close to
zero servings sold daily.

The sales numbers for each food item were different in the summer from what
they were in the winter. Iced coffee sales rose significantly, to an average of
40 servings sold daily. The item that had the second highest number of sales was
ice cream, with an average of 35 servings sold daily. Hot coffee sales fell to just
30 servings daily. Soup and salad had the lowest number of sales, with
25 servings sold daily on average.

In general, the average daily sales of each food item changed when the season
changed. Certain items were more popular in the winter, but certain others were
more popular in the summer.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70982142857 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97504662016 2.65546596893 74% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.397321428571 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0188018023 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1538461538 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 3.83414634146 469% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181721635039 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965923818807 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744156230528 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796352402653 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704788193677 0.0819641961636 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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