The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.

The graph provides the rate of annual Gross Domestic Product (GDP) growth in different kind of countries: wealthy, globalisers and non-globalisers countries in respectively 1960, 1970, 1980 and 1990s.

Overall, there are an upward trend of annual GDP growth in globalisers countries, wealthy countries have a decrease of rate over the years and we see a fluctuation on average from 1970 concerning non-globalisers countries.

Globalisers states increased on amount from about 1.4% in 1960 to 2.8% in 1970 to reach slightly 3.2% in 1980 then rose dramatically the top of 4.9% in 1990. While we have a downward trend in term of GDP rate of wealthy countries dropping from about 4.7% in 1960 to 2.8% in 1970 and continued falling to reach 2% in 1990.

Non-globalisers countries followed a fluctuation in the average of GDP growth: Firstly, increased from 1960 to 1970 then fell the amount of 0.9% in 1980 and finally, upgrade to 1.4% in 1990.

In fact, countries adopted a global approach to business have a success evolution over time rather than wealthy and non-globalisers countries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'trends'?
Suggestion: trends
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, then, while, in fact, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15730337079 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06982249079 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.200898678 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297559451222 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17035822154 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110324558927 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193471522286 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971495265225 0.0819641961636 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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