The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not . Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The bar chart gives information about the average annual GDP growth in 3 types of country from 1960s to 1990s.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of wealthy countries went down steadily in 30 years while globalisers had a contrasting trend. And there was a fluctuation in non-globalisers in the same period.
As can be seen from the chart, in the 1960s, the proportion of GDP in wealthy countries was the highest, at around 5%. By contrast, the rate of globalisers was the lowest point of approximately 1,5%. While, just under 2,5% of GDP's non-globalisers.
There was a sudden decrease from around 5% to exactly 2,0% in richer countries, while that the GDP of globalisers surged over 30 years, peaked at nearly 5%. The varition of non-globalisers decrease about 1,0% over the period, then plummeted in the 1980s. It was under 1,0%
In conclusion, the average GDP grow has dramatically changed during this period, maybe between 1970s and 80s, ended up with the upward growth of globalisers anf the down trend in other two groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92045454545 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92785143913 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607954545455 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9299900962 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100309396929 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441700508432 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579319301096 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692745368781 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542492744682 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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