The graph below shows the average monthly use of a health club in Miami, Florida by all full-time members in 2013. The pie chart show the age profile of male and female members.
The graph provides information about how many full-time female and male members came to a fitness club in Miami on each month of the year 2013. Meanwhile, the pie chart illustrates the proportion of three demographic groups of the membership.
Overall, there were more male member than female counterpart in general. It is seems both sexes numbers followed the same fluctuation pattern, where the figures gradually increased and hit its peak from June to September then slowly dropped. In addition, a vast majority of the club members aged from 21 to 45.
Between January and May, the number experienced a slow increase in both genders. To be precise, male figure started from about 550 people and ended up at just above 700 people by May, while female set point was slightly lower, around 500 people, and went up to just under 600 people. In the next four months, the figure of both sexes soared up dramatically and hardly changed until October. In order words, the number of male reached its highest point at approximately 850 people for each month. Likewise, women number was around 700 to 750 people in this period. When September ended, the total use of the club also dropped and ended up at approximately 600 and 500 for male and female, respectively.
Regard the pie chart, it indicates that about half of club members were from 21 to 45 years old, 55% for male and 51% for female. Furthermore, there were about a third of the members were older than 65 years old, in which female proportion was 7% higher than their counterpart. In the others age group, the percentage was virtually small, there were about 17% to 20% of the members belong to this group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, likewise, may, so, then, third, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 289.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79238754325 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50332091065 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 106.607317073 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.68501793 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223602865205 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815889986479 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086252443886 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162508076362 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950580987907 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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