The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 an d 2030

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The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 an d 2030.

The line graph illustrates information about how many average passengers in England moved every day by cars, buses or trains within 60 years, starting in the year of 1970.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately clear that the medium number of UK commuters travelling each day by trains, car rose gradualy and these figure are predicted to keep going up. Meanwhile, the average number of passengers that moving by buses decreased steadly and is forecasted to continue to fall.
In 1970, the average figure of English commuters travelling every day by trains about 2 millions. This number increased gradualy and it is projected to keep climb to nearly 5 millions by the year of 2030. A stead rise also was witnessed at the number of people that using cars every day. It is predicted to continue to go up and will reach to south of 9 millions by the year of 2030.
By contract, a slight decline was experienced in the average figure of English commuters moving every day by buses and it is project to keep going down. Starting in 1970 with about 4 millions, this number is forecast to fall to south of 3 millions at the end of the surveyed period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60975609756 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.560413411 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3481448574 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308698701929 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131639907078 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821367584954 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196791908122 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616128887279 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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