The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and the comparis

The bar charts present the trends of 3 sectors which differently impact to UK economic in 4 periods between 1900 - 2000.
Firstly, Agriculture sector in the first half century had an upward trend by increasing from 49 percent to 53 percent. However, 50 years later there was dramatic reduction. It dropped to only 10 percent in 1975 and 3 percent in 2000 respectively.

Secondly, Manufacturing sector had an obvious downward trend. In 1900 it gradually declined from 45 percent. Later, in 1950 the percentage was at 38 percent and slightly dropped to 35 percent. Finally, in 2000 this sector effect only 2 percent in UK.

Lastly, Business and Financial sector was the only one among these sectors which had a growth within over past 100 years. It was only 3 percent in 1900 and climbed up to 9 percent in the next quarter century. Continuously, it rose to 20 percent in 1975 and hit the peak in 2000 by 35 percent.

It can be seen that both Agriculture and Manufacture had little result in UK economy. In other words, Business and Financial was the significant sector of UK.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79787234043 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73522969446 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2852866553 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.3846153846 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108211208067 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499065338777 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537733486193 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779647677859 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489287471544 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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