The bar graph depicts the input from three sectors into British economy in the twentieth century.
At the first glance, it is evident that the contributions made by agriculture and manufacturing sides were tremendous in
the earlier half of the century; however, as the years progressed business and finance became the predominant pillar of the British economy.
In the year 1900, the most significant contribution of approximately 50% was made my agriculture department, this was
succeeded by manufacturing sector which had an input of around 45%. While, business and finance had a share of mere 3%. After fifty years, the support to economy from agriculture segment grew to around 53%, whereas, that from manufacturing department fell to about 37%. However, share by the business and finance mounted about two folds to 8%.
In the later part of the century, that is in the year 1975, the input from agriculture side dropped dramatically to 10%.
Same was the case with manufacturing which saw a decline of 4%, albeit not as significant as agriculture sector. Nevertheless, business and finance was the only segment where improvement was noticed. At the end of the 20th century, agriculture sector had an input of only about 3%, while, that from manufacturing it was approximately 15%. The only area that continued to grow was business and finance which finally had a contribution of about 35%.
- The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and the comparis 67
- The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and the comparis 73
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...finance became the predominant pillar of the British economy. In the year 1900...
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...lly had a contribution of about 35%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20614035088 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.016533261 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504385964912 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9733880171 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.909090909 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163618845198 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739918317036 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536006501815 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881826537258 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637208883353 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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