The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors agriculture manufacturing and business and financial services to the UK economy in the twentieth century Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and the comparisons whe

The provided graph illustrates the responsible sectors for the UK economy in the twentieth century.
These sectors comprise Agriculture, Manufacturing and last but not least the Bussiness and Financials.

Overall there are some drastic changes during the years, however, it is observed that the contribution of Bussiness and financials is constantly increased.
It was rose from five percent in the year 1900 to approximately forty percent in the year 2000.
On the other hand, the contribution of the Agriculture fall drastically, this sector was the highest contributor having approximately fifty percent and above in 1900 and 1950 to almost less than five percent.

In regards to the Manufacturing units, the contribution got gradually decreased. It was approximately forty percent in 1900, to the fifteen percent in the year 2000.

To summarize, there was a certain decrease in the contribution of Agriculture and Manufacturing to the UK economy. Apart from this Bussiness and Financials are the main provider in the twentieth century

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...50 to almost less than five percent. In regards to the Manufacturing units, the contributi...
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Line 10, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Agriculture and Manufacturing to the UK economy. Apart from this Bussiness and F...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, apart from, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52795031056 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23520810857 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534161490683 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4868316853 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19570704946 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923135419182 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685220279101 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101348942263 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826357736809 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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