The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors agriculture manufacturing and business and financial services to the main features and makes comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services - to the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant.

The visuals present three examined indicators, agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial, contributing in percentage terms to the UK’s economy within 100 years.

It is easily seen that agriculture was ranked the most favored in the first 50 years, however, it has experienced a dramatic drop since 1950. Likewise, there was a mild decrease in manufacturing considered as the second preferred sector over time. Conversely, Business and financial saw a steady increase throughout the period from 1950 to 2000. In t 1900, the contribution rate of agriculture gained the most as compared to others, at 48 percent, and slightly rose to the peak of 50 percent in 1950. Alternatively, after the climax, agriculture’s proportions drastically leveled off and contributed below 5 percent, seen as the least recorded in 2000. Whilst, despite a modest starting point in early times, business and financial, gradually levelling up and surpassing other two sectors to reach the most contributed rate in 2000, at over 35 percent much larger than manufacturing and agriculture, 18 percent and 2 percent respectively. Additionally, manufacturing shared a similar trend with agriculture that its latest figure plummeted roughly by half compared to 1900. It is evident from the chart that business and financial areas have been massively focused of late, meanwhile, less concentration on the other two are blatant.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, however, likewise, second, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50917431193 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23848337931 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646788990826 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3970263827 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.444444444 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196382624353 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784842015473 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275044169307 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1515614924 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167875069762 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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