The provided bar chart indicates the contribution of three sectors to the economics of the UK between 1900 and 2000, namely agriculture, manufacturing, business and financial services.
Overall, business and financial services witnessed a stable growth while the other two experienced a downward pattern in contribution over the period of 100 years.
In the first year of the 1900s, contribution of agriculture to the UK economy was the highest column at about 50 percent, followed up was manufacturing in approximately 45 percent. By constract, business and financial services received a lowest ratio with around 3 percent.
Although the percentage of agriculture reach a peak of above 52 percent in 1950, there is a significantly plunge of this sector in a vicinity of 2 percent in the last of twentieth century. Likewise, the rates of contribution of manufacturing was gradually decreased over 30 percent. In the other hand, business and financial services experienced the fastest development in proportion of contribution to the UK economy in 2000 at below 35 percent in comparison with that of the other two.
- Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 89
- Internet Users as percentage of population 56
- Internet Users as percentage of population 84
- These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially.Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 89
- Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...usiness and financial services received a lowest ratio with around 3 percent. ...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('plunge') instead of another adjective.
...k of above 52 percent in 1950, there is a significantly plunge of this sector in a vicinity of 2 perce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35593220339 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29649276753 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7307660515 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.428571429 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27167098835 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125091034078 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507522866701 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165669314038 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416961306074 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.