The graph below shows the fertility rate of women in six Gulf countries.
The given bar graph compares the fertility rate of women in six different Gulf countries between 1990 and 2000.
It is clear that the fertility rate declined over the decade in all the countries. The number of births per woman in oman and saudi Arabia was higher than the other four countries.
In 1990, oman women had the highest fertility rate, with 7 births per woman, closely followed by saudi arabian, with 6.7. On the other hand, the average of births for each woman in Qatar, and UAE countries was about 4. Bahrain and Kuwait had the lowest rate in fertility of woman with about 3.5 births of woman.
In 2000, although there was a noticeable decreased in the fertility rate of a woman, oman and saudi arabian were still the countries which had the highest rates in births per woman, stood at 5.5. In the remain countries, the figures reduced to 2-3 by the year 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s in births per woman, stood at 5.5. In the remain countries, the figures reduced to 2-3 b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64968152866 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20435544509 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547770700637 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6668632073 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262076049121 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161484936287 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106898950101 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195173429169 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103833153004 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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