The graph below shows the number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city by gender
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
A glance at the graph provided reveals some striking similarities between the figure of men and women cell phone subcribers in Marysville city during the period from 1995 to 2015. It is evident that the number of men and wowen subcribing in cell phone grown dramatically, with low in 1995 and high in 2015.
The women cell phone subcribers were just approximatelly 500 in 1995, then it soared to reached the peak of 2500 subcribers in 2005. This was followed by a 5 years period of steady fall, with the number of women subcibers in the city were about 2250 in 2010 and it was maintened to 2015.
Meanwhile, the cell phones subcribed by men increased exponentially from 500 subcribers in 1995 to 2500 subcribers in 2005. And then this number was stable for the next 5 years, before climbing slightly to somewhere in the vicinity of 2750 subribers.
It is interesting to note that the trend of cell phone subcibers in Marysville was not too much different from each gender, the gap between the two widened after this time as women subcribers drop slightly in 2010.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...0 in 2010 and it was maintened to 2015. Meanwhile, the cell phones subcribed by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77005347594 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66598859901 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51871657754 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9725647698 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118548304147 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652429583874 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271528022445 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801455258787 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325046551266 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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