The graph below shows the number of complaint made about noise to environment health authorities in city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996.
The line graph compares the number of complaints to environment health authorities in city of Newtown about four types of noise such as traffic noise, factories, road works and domestic household between 1980 and 1960.
Overall, the complaints in Newtown increase over the period of time except for domestic noise, which was the highest but pledged and became the list. Interestingly, a majour observed in complaints related to road works.
To begin with, there was a highest complaints about domestic noise in the year of 1980,which was just over 600 complaints, after that in 1990, there was a half number of complaints as compared to 1980,then which was suddenly decrease. However, 400 complaints about factories noise in 1980,that was constant increase and reached 800 complaints at the end of the period.
Secondly, traffic noise and road works were shows similar trend. In the year 1980,traffic noise and road works stood at 500 and 300 complaints respectively, then next four years, there were stable. After that, which were noticeable drop in the year of 1986.after that which were peak and reached high of 1300 and 600 complaints at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...complaints in Newtown increase over the period of time except for domestic noise, which was th...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... road works. To begin with, there was a highest complaints about domestic noise...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'decreased'.
Suggestion: decreased
...ompared to 1980,then which was suddenly decrease. However, 400 complaints about factorie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, second, secondly, then, except for, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09375 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67655636837 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510416666667 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0213775702 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299164783864 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136327034581 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122811856387 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20189381127 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143091098782 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.