The given line chart illustrates the number of questions given to the Tourist Information Office in person, by letter/email and by telephone in one city from January to June in 2011.
Overall, while the number of enquiries in person and by telephone experienced a dramatic growth, the influx of questions sent by letter or by email witnessed a reverse trend. Additionally, of all the three, in person enquiries was the most popular choice of tourists at the end of the given period.
In January, the quantity of direct questions was at 400 units, the lowest compared to others. However, during the timescale, there was an approximately fivefold increase to 1900 enquiries which made the questions sent in person rose the highest record in June.
In the first four months of period, while email enquiries underwent a slight fluctuation in the range of 800 to 1000, the figures surged significantly to 1600 for the rest of time. Consequently, the overall pattern of email questions was upbeat.
Specifically, after having remained relatively stable at about 700 for the first 3 months, questions via telephone halved to merely 400 questions in May and June alike which came to the lowest point at the end of timescale.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06403940887 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84135266414 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556650246305 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3151536041 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156499929349 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691784122197 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780584151924 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937576086837 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860623860317 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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