The graph below shows the number of magazines sold in 5 different countries in 2005 and 2015. A prediction for 2025 is also given.
The given column graph illustrates magazines that sold in five nations (France, US, UK, Italy, and Spain) in 2005 and 2015 and indicates the prediction for 2025.
It is seen from the graph , it is clear that France had sold the majority of magazines in both the years. 40,000 in 2005 but fell slightly to around 38,000 in 2015. It also predicts that they will sell highest number of magazines by 2035 roughly up to 35,000. But, Spain had sold the least number of magazines. In 2005, they sold only 5,000 magazines and 6,000 magazines in 2015.Italy will sell lowest magazines just around 1,000 by 2025. The US had sold same of magazines in both 2005 and 2015 to about 32,000, however, it will fall and will drop to 25,000 magazines by 2025.
UK and Italy had sold almost equal number of magazines in 2015 about 20,000. UK had sold more magazines in 2005 than Italy. Moreover,UK will sell up to nearly 18,000 magazines by 2025.
Overall, France had sold the more magazines and also will sell where spain had sold less magazines and Italy will sell less magazines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n for 2025. It is seen from the graph , it is clear that France had sold the ma...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'sell the highest'.
Suggestion: sell the highest
...n 2015. It also predicts that they will sell highest number of magazines by 2035 roughly up ...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Italy
...0 magazines and 6,000 magazines in 2015.Italy will sell lowest magazines just around ...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'sell the lowest'.
Suggestion: sell the lowest
... and 6,000 magazines in 2015.Italy will sell lowest magazines just around 1,000 by 2025. Th...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , UK
...e magazines in 2005 than Italy. Moreover,UK will sell up to nearly 18,000 magazines...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun magazines is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...and also will sell where spain had sold less magazines and Italy will sell less maga...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun magazines is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...sold less magazines and Italy will sell less magazines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66137566138 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23223054042 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465608465608 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0034796145 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0909090909 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340062907707 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165029306941 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740097500716 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24584027043 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869783311493 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.07 8.06136585366 75% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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