The line graph illustrate the quantity of overseas tourist foreign to 3 different natural landscapes in a specific European from 1987 to 2007.The number of overseas travelers to the coast the mountain and the lakes surged during the years shown. The people who visited the coast was higher than those to the two others. In 1987,the number of foreign people to the coast was the highest, it is 40TH.This number double the amount of visitors come to visit the mountain and in create by four time the amount of lakes visitors. However, the number of people to the mountain and the lake was 20TH and 10TH. In 1987 to 1992, the amount of coast visitors decreased gradually while lake's increased decrease slightly, the amount of mountain viewer slightly increase before sank down and sitting at the same place as lake's. The percentage of visitors to the coast kept on increasing until it reached the peak in 2007. The proportion of people who visited the mountain go through an erratic period still have the lowest amount of passenger compare to the others 2.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...n a specific European from 1987 to 2007.The number of overseas travelers to the coa...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he lakes surged during the years shown. The people who visited the coast was higher...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...o the coast was the highest, it is 40TH.This number double the amount of visitors co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, still, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79120879121 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38823344303 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543956043956 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5588223176 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.571428571 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177550626855 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824457977114 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832239477053 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177550626855 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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